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Sing to me again
With that guitar and jagged voice
Of how something beautiful
Is a minute away
Seconds now
I’ve done this before
And I don’t see it coming

Regrets
Like newspaper headlines
And we lie side by side  
But this bed is as empty as  
A grave
your fingers don’t feel
Like they used to
On satin sheets
Your eyes were of the
Ocean
You won my heart
For a second
And nothing more

And we could
Venture Paris
At night
with the lights
And all the lovers
With their poetry and songs
But I still
Wouldn’t see
The beauty.

Seconds now
I’ve done this before
And I don’t see it coming
©2008-2009 ~muteternal
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wow.
i like it:D

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My ring! THE RING IS MINE
thank you! :D

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i want to do to you, what spring does to the cherry trees
You're good. I usually don't read much of the poetry on DA cause it's... well, not that great most of the time. You're proving to be the exception. :)

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I will break into your thoughts
With what's written on my heart
:hug:

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My ring! THE RING IS MINE
this is really beautiful. i love the overall feel to it.
:heart:
It's a beautiful poem. The emotion is raw and real, it paints a picture of disappointment and pain. sorry

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